Comments on: Sunset http://www.averyktingle.com/2010/06/04/sunset/ The Rants and Raves of Author Avery K. Tingle Fri, 28 Oct 2011 03:19:38 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: AveryTingle http://www.averyktingle.com/2010/06/04/sunset/comment-page-1/#comment-396 AveryTingle Sat, 12 Jun 2010 03:22:23 +0000 http://www.averyktingle.com/?p=993#comment-396 I'm sorry it took me so long to reply. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment! I'm glad you all enjoyed it! I'm sorry it took me so long to reply. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment! I'm glad you all enjoyed it!

]]> By: ganymeder http://www.averyktingle.com/2010/06/04/sunset/comment-page-1/#comment-362 ganymeder Fri, 04 Jun 2010 14:39:32 +0000 http://www.averyktingle.com/?p=993#comment-362 Wonderful, almost poetic, quality to this, especially the sunset theme and ending. Nicely done. Wonderful, almost poetic, quality to this, especially the sunset theme and ending. Nicely done.

]]> By: Marisa Birns http://www.averyktingle.com/2010/06/04/sunset/comment-page-1/#comment-361 Marisa Birns Fri, 04 Jun 2010 12:34:02 +0000 http://www.averyktingle.com/?p=993#comment-361 Wow, this was a powerful story and excellent narrative! I cringed while I read but only because your description of the beating was so vividly rendered. Well done, and welcome back to #fridayflash! Wow, this was a powerful story and excellent narrative!

I cringed while I read but only because your description of the beating was so vividly rendered.

Well done, and welcome back to #fridayflash!

]]> By: mazzz in Leeds http://www.averyktingle.com/2010/06/04/sunset/comment-page-1/#comment-360 mazzz in Leeds Fri, 04 Jun 2010 12:24:11 +0000 http://www.averyktingle.com/?p=993#comment-360 Cool story, cool character. Excellent voice here, I identify with him even though our lives couldn't be more different Cool story, cool character. Excellent voice here, I identify with him even though our lives couldn't be more different

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