Comments on: Part One: Red Morning http://www.averyktingle.com/2010/07/23/pt1redmorning/ The Rants and Raves of Author Avery K. Tingle Fri, 28 Oct 2011 03:19:38 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: AveryTingle http://www.averyktingle.com/2010/07/23/pt1redmorning/comment-page-1/#comment-438 AveryTingle Thu, 29 Jul 2010 12:40:25 +0000 http://www.averyktingle.com/?p=1044#comment-438 Thank you very much, Jon! I'm honored you enjoyed it! Thank you very much, Jon! I'm honored you enjoyed it!

]]> By: J. M. Strother http://www.averyktingle.com/2010/07/23/pt1redmorning/comment-page-1/#comment-437 J. M. Strother Thu, 29 Jul 2010 03:36:51 +0000 http://www.averyktingle.com/?p=1044#comment-437 This is really an interesting world you have going here, Avery. Just different enough from our own to really suck me in. ~jon This is really an interesting world you have going here, Avery. Just different enough from our own to really suck me in.
~jon

]]> By: AveryTingle http://www.averyktingle.com/2010/07/23/pt1redmorning/comment-page-1/#comment-433 AveryTingle Tue, 27 Jul 2010 12:33:20 +0000 http://www.averyktingle.com/?p=1044#comment-433 Oops...that's what I get for not doing my editing in time. :-) Thanks for pointing that out! Glad you enjoyed it! Oops…that's what I get for not doing my editing in time. :-) Thanks for pointing that out! Glad you enjoyed it!

]]> By: Laura Eno http://www.averyktingle.com/2010/07/23/pt1redmorning/comment-page-1/#comment-431 Laura Eno Tue, 27 Jul 2010 12:03:15 +0000 http://www.averyktingle.com/?p=1044#comment-431 Awesome tension in this! I found myself holding my breath several times... Note - I think you have a typo - Bethany managed to cling *to* the railing - Missing the *to*? Awesome tension in this! I found myself holding my breath several times…

Note – I think you have a typo – Bethany managed to cling *to* the railing – Missing the *to*?

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